Hello! Thank you for your interest in Paradisa. While we understand the significance of Alexis's loss, we'd like to request you revise it slightly. 30 minutes is quite a long time for any effects to kick in, particularly because it's possible to simply time it so she can only read for 29-ish minutes a pop without getting migraines. We suggest either lowering the time limit (5-10 minutes or something similar), making the effect even more severe, or coming up with a new loss entirely.

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