Hello! Thank you for your interest in Paradisa. Before we give you a final decision, we'd like to see some revisions on your application.
The first person sample is very short and does not give us a very good sense of Tauriel's personality. The extra meme sample, while very introspective, is somewhat short on dialogue. We would like to request another sample similar to something you might post in the game, so we have a better idea of what to expect.
We would also like to request you make a more concrete decision about her abilities and skills. While we understand that canon isn't very clear on what she can and cannot do, we would like for you to definitively say what her skills are one way or the other so we know what to expect in Paradisa.
In addition, please be mindful of your formatting. Standard practice is to double space each new paragraph.
You have 72 hours to return your revisions. Thank you!
REVISIONS
The first person sample is very short and does not give us a very good sense of Tauriel's personality. The extra meme sample, while very introspective, is somewhat short on dialogue. We would like to request another sample similar to something you might post in the game, so we have a better idea of what to expect.
We would also like to request you make a more concrete decision about her abilities and skills. While we understand that canon isn't very clear on what she can and cannot do, we would like for you to definitively say what her skills are one way or the other so we know what to expect in Paradisa.
In addition, please be mindful of your formatting. Standard practice is to double space each new paragraph.
You have 72 hours to return your revisions. Thank you!