BOOKS/COMICS APPLICATIONS

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Roy Harper | APPROVED

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Lian Harper | APPROVED

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REVISE

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While you seem to have a fairly good grasp on the character's voice, we feel there are a lot of aspects you have left out of his "About" section. We'd like to see you expand on this section, focusing mostly on his aspects of his personality. Specifically we'd like to hear more about how growing up alone seems to have affected him, and how much he actually seems to know verses how much he seems willfully ignorant about.

LOSS CHANGE

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As his heart is NOT inside him as of his canon point, then it is not an acceptable loss, Calcifer is an appable character (and has been played in Paradisa alone before) and therefore can't be NPCd so you will need to find an alternative loss for him, thank you.

PENDING

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The mods are discussing this app and will get back to you ASAP.

Destruction | APPROVED

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Tyrion Lannister | APPROVED

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REVISE

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Overall the app looks very solid! The only concern is that the loss you picked for him might be a little too extreme. We request that you pick just one friend for him to forget as his loss, or alternatively we will accept another loss altogether, if you'd prefer.

Troo O'Malley | APPROVED

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Daenerys Targaryen | APPROVED

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Shatterstar | APPROVED

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REVISE

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We would like to see some insight into Katniss' personality, as you have just given a history of her life. If you are having trouble with what to put into this section, please consult our what we're looking for article.

Also, the name of the country is Panem, not Pancea ;)

APPROVED

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DECLINED

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We will have to decline your app as the writing quality does not meet Paradisa's standards. Your About the Character section does not meet the 500 word minimum, and paints only a very vague picture of the character.

Also your choice of loss would not affect the character, as Harry does not make it a habit to broadcast his family's treatment of him anyway.

Thank you.

APPROVED

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Lemony Snicket | APPROVED

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Cimorene | APPROVED

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Revision

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Overall the app seems solid enough, however we'd like to request a new first person sample to better help us gauge your voice for Sirius.

Evan Sabahnur | APPROVED

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BLUES - APPROVED

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FRODO BAGGINS | APPROVED

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